sick
sick man, i like your style.
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a bald ballet dancer dances on a random cliff and a random car out of nowhere smashes into him
Choppy and stupid.
First of all, It paused every few seconds
Second, the plot isn't NG material.
Third, HOW THE FUCK DID THE CAR GET THERE?! You need to improve in the setting for the car to get there. For example, don't make the middle so thin and add more land on the right hand side.
pandasinhell responds:
no see thats what i wanted i wanted it to be random and people to say how the hell did they get up there
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