Audio is terrible
I like the art, and I really lol'd at the poster in the first part, but damn, you gotta work on the audio.
Great drawing style.
I love the artwork. very unique and interesting...
but the movie just wasn't very funny. Try working on audio quality (microphone "pops" from p or b sounds), humor, and loudness. It was pretty quiet.
But I love the hair and backgrounds. Put a little more effort into the humor section and you'll have yourself a fine, dandy, little piece of flash.