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Well that was pathetic.
Thats it, baby!
If you got it, FLAUNT IT!
FLAAAUUUNT IT!!!
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Well that was pathetic.
Yes, and?
good for someone new and interested in flash
you've got a good foundation of basics. Give more time to your art and don't be afraid to use your own jokes and lines!
Hmmmm....
the story needs work.
the animation needs work.
the length needs work...
try using some ''how to'' things on the animation...might work. right now, a 3/10