"No cloud, wait, help me please!" xD
hahahahha that was my favourite line also xD
Akward, perverse and messed up
All in all it wasn't all that bad, your moving along with you character animations so keep up the good work. Nice original story plot.
um..i don't know, but it is a good start.
yeah i mean i also dont like hentai but this night of changed my mind about it
cheers why not chek out part two or my flash gaylord of the rings. im happy i made someone like hentai xD (does that make me a perv?
it was good exept the voices try getting more voice actors lol