jeez why did he take his underwear
the kids reaction was too great
The quality of your illustrations is pretty good, but I think I saw a lot of tweens, you need to use less.
Also the story needs a change in pace more often, it seemed like it was going to slow.
Good job though!
But you still need to polish your animation skills. You should move your characters up and down when they walk, also they should blink from time to time. Also, the stairs looked like a ramp with lines, next time use shading and vertical lines to distinguish it more clearly.
The jokes... Well, they were OK, I liked Leon imitating MJ.... But no joke really make me laugh... Maybe is because the movie in general is kinda slowpaced, making the story go a little faster would be an improvement, I think.
leon looked at the kid and then THRILLER hoaohaoahoahoahoahoa michael jackson
funny but i wish there was one more take on hunk