My second animation, tried including voices in this one. Will still try to answer anything you ask, please leave comments on how I can improve.
Ok....
I didnt think the animation style was very well done. I think you put effort in and I gave you a 2 because I think it will easily make it passed the portal. It wasnt great, but for a second animation it was good. Hopefully your next flash is better.
Meh.
The plot is, well, not unique or interesting. The voices do add something to this, and I rather like the zoom in effect going into the dream sequence... Not a bad flash in the grand scheme of things, but nothing very interesting. The graphics, sound, story, animation... It's all just under average without anything sticking out as being awful. Not awful.