Chickenball Z, Episode 1.
My first Flash submitted to NG. I hope you guys like it.
(This is a Parody of several DBZ fan series)
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This contains sprites. If you don't like sprites, don't bloody watch.
Several of the names used in this episode (such as Crystal Chicken Things and Chicken 2) are parody's of several animations that make names up as they go along, so please try not to be too bothered about them.
All hail the Bird Empire
Excellent work as always, Will. Though I still think *Evil Bird who I won't name* looks odd as hand-drawn. Though it looked good as part of the introduction, it may look awkward if it comes to seeing the chickens and the villain on the screen together facing each other/talking. All in all, good job though
Great for a first flash
I was expecting some third-rate, 12fps crap since this is your first flash. I guess you proved us all wrong. Also, dispite the fact that this is yet another Dragon Ball Z parody, you used chickens as the characters, which, as far as I know, has never been done before. It was also funny from time to time. The only thing wrong was that the main villain was hand-drawn and everything else was sprited, which is an awkward combination. Aside from that, this is a very great first. Can't wait for the second one!
Graphics: 9
Story: 8
Sound: 9
Animation: 8
Creativtity: 8
Overall: 8.4
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Thank you very much! I've realized I've made quite a few mistakes in the first episode, so I'll be sure to fix them for 2#.
Meh.
It was okay. I was expecting some fighting though.
The first few episodes of a series are more or less going to be full of storyline development, so there's not much room for fighting in the first episode.
Awesometastic
To be honest I was expecting for the worst but I was totally wrong, it was great. It was a good parody and I had a few chuckles here and there. Only thing that bugged me was that the evil chicken felt out of place and some of the text kind of looked a little simple. The names are great, I actually can remember em all. Can't wait for the next one.
Whoa, nice.
This is a great parody of Dragonball Z and many other series. I especially like the name " Crystal chicken things" But I guess the chicken 1-2 exc. thing can annoy a lot of people, but professor chicken was a good name. The animation was very smooth, but the main villain wasn't sprited, which sorta put a bit of laziness into the mix. Sprite the main villain please.
Thanks. I think I will have to sprite the main villain for the next episode, to make everything fit in perfectly.