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It is suppose to be short... cause it is a short.

A Geek Sings To his girlfriend about their true love, and what it means to him.

A cute song from "Songs To Wear Pants To"

Enjoy... vote fairly, and review.

- Darx


You've got much more talent than you think.

- Good stuff -
Pretty cute. The Guitar Hero buttons on the classic guitar was pretty funny.

- Bad stuff and improvments -
It was pretty short, you should've submitted to the Songs to Wear Pants to collab but I suppose you released this eariler it was submitted. A way to lengthen the shortness is to make a couple of those Sonds to Wear Pants To and put them together. Song sucks but I suppose it was mant to be like to add the humour but it didn't really work.

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I think you can do better

The song kinda sucked but I assume that this was done on purpose to add humor to the flash. Sure it was kinda funny, but somehow it made the movie not that enjoyable to watch. The fact that it is also very short and that there is not much happening made this movie a bit average in my opinion. You do seem to be good with graphics however. The drawings were pretty good and the animation was nice and smooth.

Since you can draw pretty well, I think you could´ve done way better if you had chosen a different song and had made a longer flash. I know this is supposed to be short because it is a "short", but it just kinda missed the climax I think. It was a bit boring. Maybe you should´ve made that girl do something funny at the end.

Overall 5 out of 10, 2 out of 5. It was okay, but I think you can do better.

~Auz, Review Request Club


The best thing about this flash was the Guitar Hero controller. I have no idea where you managed to get the audio file from, but I'd certainly say that you need to aniimate a better tune next time.

The animation was good quality and it had sort of a Metal Gear Awesome style about it, which I really liked. You've got more than just potential, from what I've seen so far from this animation.

I look forward to seeing future projects of yours.

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That song sucks bad. I agree that the use of the guitar hero controller was funny, and the animation wasn't too bad, but I think that you could have put more detail into it. For example, instead of having the lyrics on the screen, maybe have images that reflect the lyrics. You could have it so that it's night time, and they're sitting by a camp fire, and a faded image of harry potter or gandalf would appear in the sky. That's just me with ideas, but, yeah, something like that would really bring the graphics up a notch and make it more interesting. But as it is, it was quite well done, good lip synching.
Keep it up!

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Heh, the song kinda... sucks. But it's funny at the same time.

I liked that the guy singing had only a "Guitar Hero" guitar in his hands and not a real guitar. This sure adds some more humor to the flash.

The lip sync was done quite well, even though it looks a bit strange from time to time, but this is only a very minor flaw.

A much bigger flaw is the plain background. Add something more to it. A cupboard or a TV or a table with a flower on it... there are many possibilities. But right now it looks plain ugly.

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3.39 / 5.00

Feb 29, 2008
7:48 PM EST
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