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better luck next time
Author Comments
Yes pplz i kno it sux in pretty much every way, but i want every1 to see how i build up over time so i submit almost any random thing i do. This is my first drawn animation without stickmen, and i think it is the first non stickmen i ever drew on the computer. hope yall enjoy.. or at least not blam me. thnx
Not your best
I am glad that it wasn't badly drawn sticks, but it wasn't your best. Still mildly funny. I would just say...work on it. My biggest problem with this was the way that the sound jumped in and out. Honestly, I can't stand that. Turning up the volume to hear what they are saying and then there is some loud sound effect...ouch
Cladicus-Claveman responds:
yea sum1 else mentioned that. i need a better microphone or sum audio editing software. I'll try harder next time i try sumtin like this... u think my stix r bad? sad to say they r my strong point
That shit nearly blew my eardrums out.
The explosion did, but your voice is alright, just dont submit random shit anymore.
Cladicus-Claveman responds:
Thanx, I just wanted to see if i was ne good to pplz at voice acting to see if i should bother, sry bout ur eardrums! lol sry if u think my random stuff sux, if i submit nething lyke that i will actually try to come up wit something less random
Good..
I suggest making more frames for each mouth position, and maybe getting a better mic. But it was good, the voices fit the characters.
Cladicus-Claveman responds:
thnx, glad u think my voice acting is good, that was the main reason i submitted this test was to see wat u guys think.
Not the place
Newgrounds isn't really the place to submit "almost any random thing I do." If you want to upload something without much appeal for others, I suggest using a site where they automatically upload all your stuff, like deviant art or sheezy art... though maybe you may as well use a site like swfupload.com...
also, the voices were quiet, and not that good in my opinion.
There's a voice acting forum somewhere, maybe you could use that?
Cladicus-Claveman responds:
eh, maybe so. but i just want all my progress to be documented on newgrounds, u kno? so maybe 1 day if i get really good, pplz can see where i started out and maybe try from where i began
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- Feb 26, 2008
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