Lack of Humor
Not too good, and not too bad considering u made this in minutes. You've got some good flash skills. Hope you do something better than this in the future. :)
Author Comments
One day... they decided to take the whooper off the menu...
Smiley Bob helped
a tad bit
Needs lots of improving
You've got a good idea for a movie, but the final product leaves much to be desired. The visuals were pretty bad, not in an insulting way, but the characters blended into the background too much. The mouth movements ended up looking bizarre, as realistic as you tried to make them look.
The audio was pretty cruddy, too. A bunch of mumbling for voice acting and nothing you could understand at all.
You guys could do a lot better. This just seems like a rocky bump.
Anti-Human responds:
It wasn't supposed to look good. It was a short stupid flash i made in a couple minutes. It was kinda just some random idea i came up with in two seconds. Sorry that you are dissapointed but i apriciate that you took the time to give out addvice
Technically Good, Humorously Lacking
I think this is a complete movie and it's pretty well made, but I just didn't find it funny. I expected a bit more out of a spoof than poop jokes and lasers. You've got obvious flash skills, but I hope you will use them to make something more original and creative in the future.
hrm
not too bad... dece