Good
This was really good. I liked the animation style and it seems you spent a lot of time on the little details that make this good. The audio could have been better, but it worked out fine. Keep the videos coming, I'll be on the lookout for them!
Author Comments
This is about a girl in my school that devours at least 5 bagels a day. I spent one week with the idea and story board and then a week animating and drawing.
Good animation, and funny, but..
Like everyone else said I liked the south park style animation. When they were running it wasn't that great but besides that it was pretty smooth. It was also pretty funny sometimes. But some of the characters had really loud voices and others had really quite voices, which is kind of annoying when wearing headphones (but not with speakers). Not that big of a deal but something to think about next time. Anyways overall good job.
npepin responds:
Ya, it bugged me too. I kept running into some odd problems with audacity.
lol
it was ok. i thought that you did good with the south park style animation and it was a good idea. the sound though was a bit off. but I also really liked the songs you made yourself (i think). keep trying and you'll have something really good
npepin responds:
Thank you. And I did sing the songs and make up the songs myself.
alright
wasn't bad, i liked the south park style animation, but there was a giant gap in the audio level of some of the characters (which is a pet peeve of mine)
I supose it was okay.
This isn't anything amazing, Im not going to lie to you. But I think you may have potential and the Hitler orange thing made me chuckle.
