It was drawn quite well.
I didn't like the theme at hand nor the ideas behind this short, but I will have to say that it is quite unique in its artistic style.
One gripe I have with this flash is the innaccurate notes. I wouldn't consider the nudity, violence, and adult themes to be "mild," but that is just an opinion of mine. I feel the violence is excessive, as well as adult themes, and nudity to be a degree inbetween.
In a short summary, the art and flow was good, the ideas you put your talent to use is questionable in my opinion. But hey, maybe you're just targetting an audience that does not involve every single person whom enters newgrounds to see this on the front page.
^This is an excellent example of a negative review that doesn't suck.
WTF is wrong with you?
I'm not the one who makes sprite movies
Contrived of Desperation
Why don't you put your talent to good use and make something enjoyable? The one and only redeeming quality here was your artistic style. The story was terrible. Does the evil guy even die at the end, or was that just a dream?
You'd better not let any other students or co-workers see this as it will most certainly be viewed as a cry for help. Or maybe that's exactly what this is. Do you keep a knife on you at all times?
Call up a friend and go get some icecream or pet a puppy or SOMETHING. Cheer up, dude.
In all 258 replies that were made so far, including the negative ones, noone saw this cartoon as a "cry for help", this is purely your own wierd and illogical interpretation.
Perhaps you are a bit depressed yourself?
If so, stop bothering people with your own problems.
You seriously need to seek mental help. The artwork was good, ish. If this is a peek into your brain activities then I am very scared.
oh well, yes, the world would have been a magical place if everyone had a brain has boring as yours.
Sorry mate, but that was disturbing bad imo. Where's the stroryline? Most people like a little story. The sounds weren't good tbh and the animations weren't very nice =/
But, at leasrt you did better than me, I suck in drawing.