Very Smooth
But needed sound and better ideas. Try and be creative. I'm sure you will get very good at animating. I wish you good luck.
go easy on me my first ever flash video... 8)
and i was wondering how to add a loader??? The new grouds loader?
Very Smooth
But needed sound and better ideas. Try and be creative. I'm sure you will get very good at animating. I wish you good luck.
Ehhh...
Nothing really interesting about it. The animation was smooth but it seemed like a lot of unskilled tweening, which is understandable you being new to it and all. The sticks looked like they were floating in something everytime they moved. I think it must have been more tweening. Keep working and you'll improve.
hmmmm....
the thing that really turned me off to this movie was the weird physics that was going on..... it looked like the stick figures in the movie were swimming or floating or something like that when they were fighting..... in particular when they flip or are knocked backwards. that and the movement speed was not right, a lot of things in the movie just did not look natural at all. The character animation was ok and pretty damn good for someone's first flash. another thing..... well it didnt make the movie worse but there was no sound.....no music or sound effects, you might want to consider adding music and sound effects for your next flash animation. Well thats all I guess.... just keep working on your flash skills :)
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Well for your very first flash movie it's okay.
-But watch the human physics.. some movements are just un-human.
-Create some effects with transparent tweens or something during the punches or when the guy turns yellow.
-Add some music or sound effects!
If you're looking for a preloader? You can easily find it on Google / Newgrounds.
Cheers!
Great work for a first-timer.
Although I'm more inclined to be harsher due to the lack of sound and a storyline I'll forgo all of it and take your "first ever" animation attempt at face value.
Pleasantries aside, I must say, it was a very fluid animation that was most definitely better than my first attempts at dancing with the beast known as Flash MX; I believe that, given time, your skills will develop and you will flourish as an artist. Don't give up! Seven out of Ten.