Kinda ok
It's kinda good for a school project, since I assume you haven't had much time to make it.
this is my first submission to newgrounds and it is a school project, enjoy!
Kinda ok
It's kinda good for a school project, since I assume you haven't had much time to make it.
Yeh this guy under me is a retard
oh hatman read : its a school project. you know last minute thing. thats why it sucked so much, anyways your a loser and as far as this movie goes i give it a ten on ten
Its a girl mummy!
Yeah it is a girl im thinking, but if im wrong... well...
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Anyway.
If this was for a school project id give it a c at best sorry.
- There was a lack of attention grabbing in it. Basiclly unless you where determined to watch this for the sake of seeing the whole thing through, i think most people would close the window half way through.
- The clock dude. It goes from 11:59 pm to 12 pm. Which is wrong for a digital clock, i may be nit picking i think but next time change it so it goes from 11:59 pm to 12 am or if it was ment to be about someone waking up at 12 pm and just watching tv, then the clock would be at 11:59 am first.
- Lack of colour. Some times a little can go along way, the paintings did add a nice effect to it but it was so minimal, which is also a good thing cos i guess it gave the "girl" more attention in a way.
Heres a 5 kiddo.
People are being too rough.
The art was good, I like your style, it's first on friggin newgrounds. You'vw got to givwe your work some credit.
wooh
yay for monkeh arm people watchin tv! it WOUULD look familiar if i was a girl....