in short:
well. The character and skateboard movement was all just free transform and motion tween, there was no background, music was irrelevant, and the blood drawing was kinda bad. Work on those things.
This is my first published animation.
Its a small guy who skates.
It is quite short but it runs over 700+ frames
It's also a bit glitchy :S
Enjoy!
There will be a sequel which should be out soon - Skate Show 2
AND...
my new game 'The Easiest Impossible Quiz' is nearly ready - believe me it's not the easiest!
in short:
well. The character and skateboard movement was all just free transform and motion tween, there was no background, music was irrelevant, and the blood drawing was kinda bad. Work on those things.
i cant:- it was done wen i had Flash CS3 i only hav MX now
slowww
the movement of the skate board was really slow and boring and the character was like never moving at all.
the idea is good but it really needs some work.
first off you should add some music to it and a background.
and let the character move faster.
the good part was the bleeding scene XD!
i hope skate show 2 will be much better i will look forward to review it.
well it should have music - Buck Rogers by Feeder
and i know it needs work but dont worry i promise that 'Skate Show 2' will be better.
Thanks for the review
its ok
good animation, but the frame rate is way too slow and the graphics are really bad. Also, try making it longer and use the Vcam to follow the skater then it would look alo better.
ok i can try - bit confused by Vcam but i will work it out. thanks for the comments.
good but not good.
it was good because of the idea and wat u were trying to do but like u said in comments, its very slow and glitchy, i think u may want to take this idea and redo it without the glitches. but good job anyways =P
im doing work on 'Skate Show 2' and hopefully it will be less glitchy and im going to speed it up. Thanks for the comment
Needs improvement
First off, your stick character has NO movement what-so-ever. The animation is slow, and the animation technique is very.... newb-ish. The music is good, but you need to make the animation faster, along with the character having movement.
i will try to do it on my new 1 'Skate Show 2' which im making. thanks for the review