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NEW VERSION!!! CHECK IT OUT!

I've worked on this for a month so please be platient and wait for the "large" movie to load. It's a great episode! Contains all Ytown Public elements - Crazyness, Humour, Plot and Animation!

Story: It's a bird, it's a plane... no it's a space ship with Barbara and the Bear. Shit, this story just keeps getting better.

This time I have had many NEWGROUNDS-visitors voices added. Thank you all for you help. Without you the voices would all stink!

I will respond to all cool reviews :) The reviews is the mere reason I make these series!!!

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i guess...

you have the graphical knacks, but if you don't mind my saying so i think you may need to hire someone else to write the jokes. honestly, that "stupid joke book" would probably need to show up more than just once... and while the acting has gotten better, the sound quality really hasn't...


McRhyme responds:

The sound quality has improved some. It has, but it still isn't perfect, far from really. The jokes are not all funny. I know that. The book joke was a failiure. I added the book because I wanted the have another VIEWER'S VOICE, but I gave up and submitted. I'm thinking of deleting that part.


nice graphics

this flash has some kick-ass graphics except I didn't really think it was a "comical flash". You're tryin too hard to point out the humor. Oh well. At least you had a decent plot and the story was followable.


McRhyme responds:

I'm glad the story was followable. That's very important. I'll try to improve the humour.


Funniest so far...

That was the funniest out of the 4. The scene with the hitch-hiker was good :D


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eh...

it was okay.. but i denfinetly have to see this again sometime... it had some pretty good graphics.. but i didn't think it was that great.


McRhyme responds:

Watch it again, and if you haven't seen #3 then you really should check it out first so you understand why Barbara is in the ship with a bear, and who that idiot is who falls out of the ship! Haha!


I really don't think this series is funny

it's like he trys to hard for the funny parts like he did research and stayed up all night to get them off Fresh Prince of Bel- Air.


McRhyme responds:

I do not steal anything from Fresh Prince in Bel-Air. I steal all story ideas from Xiao Xiao. No, just kidding. I'm not sure I will submit #5. So cool off.

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Views
24,575
Votes
747
Score
3.74 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 28, 2002
3:06 AM EST
Genre
Comedy - Original
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  • Daily Feature January 29, 2002