Not too bad
It s got most of the basics- sound, animation, background etc. However, it is mostly of poor quality and there isn't much to it.
The sound is very rough and hard to hear. You need to practice and redo voices until they are clearer.
The intro thing is very basic, b/w stickmen is SO overdone and common.
I think you have the beginnings of something good, but you are not, in my opinion, ready for submitting to NG.
Please do work on it.