very good
i agree wit karlos-elite. its really good, but add badges n more features like that. make numba 2 longer cuz i was kinda dissappointed about how short it was. at least sombody died.
animation+5
music+2
some1 died+3
too short-2
=8/10
Author Comments
This is my first flash film other than a couple of tests. It was created for a competition run by Under Ground Flash. I hopefully succeeded in creating a cinematic style in it, that was my aim. It's based on the last level of CoD4, hope you enjoy it. Vote fairly! And please leave comments. Thanks for watching!
GeorgeB responds:
Thank you very much for the review, if I make a second one which is looking likely it will definitely be longer, I do have some ideas to set this in the middle east, cliché, but then again it's simply an action film :P Thanks again for the review!
Nice graphics :O
Very nice im w8ing for it ;3
herm...
pretty short, not much going on, but..... he killed somone, thats good enough for me :3
GeorgeB responds:
Lol. Well thanks for the review!
lot of potential.
this animation has lots of potential in it. I hope I can see the episode two soon
GeorgeB responds:
Yeah it should be released in the near future, at the moment I am working on a far larger project though... Thanks for the 9!
Superb
Smooth animation, Great fitting music (What music is it?), and a good but rough storyline.
But, A possible way to improve would be to add character ID. I can clearly see the hostage and the terrorists (I assume). But I got quite curious about the 'heros.' I havent played, nor do I like the CoD series so I wouldn't know. I'm wordering who they are, SWAT, Special Forces, Military? So I'd recomment adding a hat or badge or something.
Overall, this is VERY professional and you have alot of potential.
5/5 - 10/10 - Add Artist to fav.
~Karlos
GeorgeB responds:
Wow! Thank you, I never expected such a reaction to my work, I thank you greatly for your kind words! Also thanks for the great advice, I will definitely listen to it, and alter it in the next episode! Thanks for the extremely kind comment!
Also the music is: You're a Soldier Now - Steve Jablonsky