WTF?!
Rikuthemaster, u just destroyed Star Wars by killing off Chewie ,Han and Luke. Chewie was killed by the Yuuzhan Vong in 25 ABY. Ur storyline it's wrong. Why did u kill off Han?
Author Comments
This took a couple of days to construct. After reading all of your reviews, I decided to make the third one. And I did almost everything you guys told me to. Eased up on the humor, music going through the whole movie, etc. Well, here it is. Enjoy
Here are some of the technical things of the movie
14 FPS
4 Scenes
2873 Frames (excluding credits)
Rikuthemaster responds:
It's a fan made movie. I don't expect EVERYTHING to be followed how it's supposed to go. I'm not a person who follows the books of Starwars and everything. I do things how I want them to go. Plus, there's still another movie to be added after this. It's not over yet.
Better then the second one.
Graphics 80/100
Nice clean crisp, but still pixalated, which comes from using sprites. As long as you use sprites you will not get better then a 75 unless you can get some that do not pixalate. Oh, and I think Darth Vader stayed up in the air too long at certain points during the video. It almost looked like he could fly.
Audio: 80/100
Nice use of backround music. It does make the movie better. However, you need to make smoother transitions from one song to another, or just leave it to one song. Although the first music transition did work to your benefit; I thought it highlited the transition from one scene to another very well.
Story: 170/200
(I am playing around with my rating system) I like the story of how the Dark side seems to be winning. It is not really new just hardly ever done. So kudos for making the appearance that Dark side will win. Now, you have me wanting to find out what happens, and I eagerly anticipate your fourth episode.
Replay value: 75/100
Just seeing the Dark side beating the good side is enough to make me want to watch this video again. Then, there is showing it to my friends, and watching it over again there.
Overall score: 405/500 = 81/100
I gave you a score of 4/5
Very nice an improvement from you last video, and I would like to think I had something to do with that. However, if I did it was probably just a very very some part. So, keep up the good work, and I cannot wait for the next one to come. I may even watch it the week it comes out. instead of waiting for like a month to watch it. (About that I have been busy with school so I have not been able to get on Newgrounds alot.)
good story..
alternate story for star wars.
I don't like how Vader flying.. it's not right for me..
5/5 9/10
Rikuthemaster responds:
Thanks for your vote. The thing was, Vader Flew in the game. I believe he flew once in Empire Strikes Back as well. It's his way of dodging the blows, and moving quicker in this story.
pretty good
Nicely done and with great music but it would be excellent if you could click through the text once you have finished reading it. It kinda gets in the way and makes the action sequences seem very slow.
Rikuthemaster responds:
Thanks. Except the thing is I am absolutely TERRIBLE with Action Script, so I didn't even try that. I'll be sure to learn more about it come the fourth movie.
It was pretty kool too me!
I thought it was good, well it seems evil wins over good what a shame, who knows maybe four will have luke and obiwan come back. Now that would be kooler!
Rikuthemaster responds:
Thanks. The reason I chose the Evil wins over Good was because it's unpredicted. A lot of people wouldn't have imagined everyone dying.