pretty dam gud
i liked it.
Author Comments
FINALLY!!
I fixed the audio!!
I have no idea how to compress it any smaller sorry. Any tips??
Also, the alien walking through the corridor looks shite, BUT i couldn't really be arsed to animate each leg lol. Still gives the same effect though!
By the way, if you are left confused and slightly odd after watching this, then I have achieved my goal XD.
It's a 13 part series so if it doesn't make sense, it soon will do!
All the best..
*STALES*
PS. Please review, and give tips! Cheers! And it's not meant to scare, but to be creepy and confusing!
can't wait
can't wait for the second series!
full of potential!!
Joegame9 responds:
Yeah it is LOL
Alien!!
lol man
it has that lil sick sense
u kno....
well the music was funny idk y but it was funny lol
u kno the title appears and then the music duru dun dun dun dun i was like LMAO!
gj tho reminds me of a movie
ill b lookin after ep 2
Good Luck!
stay(sic)
Joegame9 responds:
Ah well, that's what being a media student does to you. Studying TV and Movie styles!
I just added some move techniques!
*STALES*
Pretty Good. But...
Its interesting, but it could have used more detail. Why were there aliens? What do they have to do with life and death? Who is our main character, etc. It Would make the story flow a bit smoother. Try to speed up what is of the description (Mabe change it to a narrorative vocal. Nice work on The Suspence. The art was good but a bit plain. The footsteps were confusing, Which way did they go? Do the Aliens Levitate and stay the same shape? Walking (or whatever mode of transportation) cycles would have been nice. Maybe more Detail on the house, unless it's supposed to be "covered in blood"
It has Potential though. It's a good start. I really hope you do continue, and put spme more effort into it. Look at the top rated vids of all time and use that quality. Look at all the tutorials. Expirament and practice, that is if you want a legendary Film.
Ill Protect it, because I want to see more. However, ill give 6/10 because I am being honest. Like I said, its a start, but it could use a bit of work to be big.
Joegame9 responds:
All noted doupen! Thanks.
I shall implement some into part 2, although i would like to keepthe drawing style as i don't likt to copy other peoples animation styles. I'm gonna use this as like my own thing, but everything else I will take into consideration XD
*STALES*
awesome
I can't wait for the series to be completed and that I hope the others are longer. I really wouldn't call this v1.1 though since to me it seemed more of a trailer then an actual episode of something. Keep up the good work though.
Joegame9 responds:
Yeah, the only reason its V1.1 is because I'd uploaded it before and it was all out of sync and stuff so I re uploaded it. Now I know it works i can rename this one and delete my old one.
Plus this one got a higher score XD
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