corridor
one word FANTASTIC
Author Comments
This is the first episode. It's my second submission ever. Hope you like it!!
gozesG responds:
thank you
Not entirely good.
But it wasn't entirely bad either. You just need to work on scene transitions. It seemed really choppy, and to jump around a lot. The crash seemed realy slow... but I couldn't tell if it was supposed to be conveyed as slow motion or not. Some things just hapened with no prep or explanation to the viewer, like the antenna glowing and suddenly spewing forth a death-ray. And what was with them calling each other "alien". Human beings don't go around calling each other aliens ('cept aliens in the border-jumping sense)... and neither would any other race of beings who were from the same planet.
Oui Corridor!!!! OMG that's so funny!!!
i love it its very detailed and the idea of giving the aliens there own language is very unique i'll give you a 5/5
