3 months? more like an afternoon
that was a loop of heart moving...no offense but, 3 months was way too long for this. this could have been done in less than an hour.
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not real flash
just a pink screen... with a phrase...
and some kind of crappy moving hearts
I think you can do a lot better... because... it doesn't look like you really care
but... I really want to tell this: NG deserve more than this... I really mean it
Any advice on how I can do better?
Lacks something. Maybe everything.
This kind of flash only works when it's something funny or original.
Whenever I can honestly say that "I can do better", you know there's a problem, because I suck hard at flash. But this is just a few words with what, two or three looping frames of heart-jiggling animation?
It's not graphically impressive. There is no sound. There is no interactivity. There is no plot, no violence, no humor. So what does leave us with?
I'm not going to trash you for graphical quality or anything, because I have no room to talk there. But, if you're going to make pointless flashes, at least make them creative and funny. Doesn't need a plot or beautiful graphics, just have some humor. Even the most crudely-made, low-effort flashes can be hilarious---even protect-worthy---if enough planning effort is put into them.
Whether the effort is put into the creative process or the flash itself, it doesn't matter. But creativity HAS to go somewhere. This is nothing new or innovative.
Your review is very good. You know how to help an artist and you are someone who should be a review mod. But I am not Tom Fulp, so this won't happen.
Have a good day, sir.