ummm not bad

this was pretty good, nice story although not very original, nice animation. Could use some sound though, all in all it was pretty good. i dk wtf the posts below me are about

Sorry, but it's not that great

I'm currently working on my first flash animation for newgrounds, and...it has...some effort behind it...
This doesn't...really.
You need to add some audio, some...movement...
other than that, i think yourcharacters are possibly better designed than mine :P
but mine have...frame by frames at points, so it makes it a little more difficult, lolz...