i like the idea, of the girl crushing but the boy really oblivious to her(mostly cuz that has happened to me). 10/10 most definately. just one question, is the boy a little, like weird? if he is a teen to adult, i don't think he would be laying on the floor doodling with crayons. Anyway, i loved it and its on my favorites, as well as you.
GREAT JOB!!!! 5/5
Thanks for the favoriting. And I guess it depends on your definition of 'weird'. He's not mentally retarded, definitely not. And technically everyone's using crayons, he's just using them in an overly childish way. I guess you could say he's a bit... eccentric. Just because he's a certain age doesn't mean he has to act a certain way, you know? We all got an inner child and he's really in tune with his. That sort of thing.
Glad you liked it and thanks for the review!
This is really nicely done :D
Its Different from most things you see on here (Cock Jokes ECT)
And you cant END IT LIKE THAT, I WAS GETTING INTO IT D:
*shakes you virgously for sequal*
lol, I'm sorry! I know, I don't like how suddenly it ends either, but for now, you'll have to put up with it. Do know that I'm going to try and put parts one and two together when I release part 2 so people can watch the entire thing in one sitting. If I'm able to do it without making flash kill itself, I'm going to make part 2 load first, so the people who have seen part one already can just pick up where they left off instead of waiting longer to see the entire thing. Thanks for the review and the shaking! Or wait, no, not for the shaking. I'm dizzy now.
Very...well I can't say "original" because eveything's been done before, but, uh....
It's one of the most interesting versions of what it is that has been on NG? Yes, that should suffice.
Oh, by the way...they didn't look like adults and I'm going to go ahead and presume on that basis that they were NOT, in fact, adults! Muah!
So...yes....prove me wrong. o_o
Teen to adult, I'd say. I don't want to pin them down with a definite age, though, because this is more abstract, thus the concept of age really isn't an important one. I want to keep the abstract feel to it, y'know? It's one of its defining characteristics. I'll elaborate more on this in future installments if I do this as a series. Thanks for the review!
this is great! everything besides the characters looks like it was drawn in crayon. that really fits the theme of the story!
Adults all drawing with crayons... strange acid trip sun and other things... It's like love at a mental institution, I like it lol
lol, love at a mental institution? The abstractness of it all does kind of make one think of that, eh? You know, that kind of ties into an ending I considered, but am leaning against since it would kind of mess up the happy vibe of the animation. Thanks for the comment!