Tsk tsk, where to begin...
First and foremost, the animation was... cute at best. Typical sprite-use, and that's fine. If you are going to use sprites for an animation, work on characterizing them a little better, make the dialogue more suited, a little easier to read...
You do have to be careful with using racial slurs and stereotypes. Personally, I'm not bothered by this, but TorTheSuperior was right. It could easily be misinterpreted as Racism. Which is bad. Very. Bad.
I get the idea of putting the glossary at the end to try to get people to watch it again, but it does make it difficult to understand on a first run, and with it being such, you may get more low votes than you deserve.
Please don't be so quick to misspell words for the sake of showing an accent without giving a warning somewhere. It makes you look ignorant.
So to review this review...
Animation acceptable.
Maybe add some voices.
ples spel purpoorly
Careful when entering racial territory.
Possibly find a less annoying loop in the music to end this with. I had to silence my computer in the first paragraph of this review.
Edge on, friend. Keep working on it!