10/10
a bit to slow
next time hold auditions for voice actors
ten!!!!
Author Comments
Religion splits up 2 regions of people.
Red Believe: The monsterous creatures of Gods mistakes shall rain like an eternal hellfire! All hail the Sin!
Blue Believe: Love is the greatest thing in the universe, enjoy life and love.
But the red were right....
Interesting.
The movie has a very slow pace, especially the beginning. People read at least 5 times as fast as you seem to think they do. Please keep that in mind.
The visuals were interesting and there were some great effects (the guys disappearing from the ship into smoke looked pretty nice). It had a nice movie-feel and an interesting style.
The action was slow and had a somewhat linear feel to it; you knew what was going to happen and didn't really care much about it.
Also, I don't understand why people would be using halberds and swords instead of guns, especially when they have gun turrets available. They didn't use the blades to block or... anything, really. That one ninja threw it. I'm pretty sure bullets make better projectiles than swords.
Still, nice flash with cool visuals. Not a fan of the storyline though. Seemed a bit dualistic + random 3rd party.
Show-R-Studios responds:
i made em long because when i put that on forums people said the notice was waaay to short....they must be really slooow
lots of potential
Very unique animation style, I like it.
Score was good as well.
Only suggestions are that it slows down, action wise, in the middle a bit.
And the Notice and Warning screens stay up about 10 seconds too long.
Great effort!
...... tooo..... long....
Seriously, I almost closed it after the "Dont steal me" thing lasted like 5 minutes, then i actually did close it at the second warning.... they are waaaaaay too long.
all it said was the notice
thats all it really said man, if not it stayed there for a long time, I recommend chekcing your actionscript to make sure you didnt put a stop(); command in there, or shortin the notice