The Narrator's Love Story

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Check out Narrator's 2nd Love Story
http://www.newgrounds.com /portal/view/487918

*Thanks for the Daily 4th!*

You can find the extended intro in the Scene Selection menu.

The Narrator tells us a story about love, and how it ends up ruining it for a group of girl on Valentine's Day. This animation does have a romantic feel because it is a Valentine Flash, but not too much romantic feel.

===Other Crap===
I introduced a running Turkey in the animation during long lines to hold you attention. Amazingly this animation turned out well this is my best animation to date. The audio in this animation is amazing and I highly suggest you check out them out and plus it's all made by Newgrounds Artists.

I have also posted a script for a scene I was planning on doing. It is located in my news post so check that out too.

Enjoy and Happy Valentine's Day!



Well it was pretty decent, the story mostly, I mean the graphics could do with some adjustments, such as the breasts on the girls, they seemed a little too far up, lol. Also the walking could be a little better at the end. Some of the animation was good, but other parts where a little so-so.

The voice acting was eh, I mean it was clear in most parts but some of it just didn't seem to work with the situation, so those could be worked on. The subtitles where a decent addition to this, also the menu and such looked pretty smooth. But it would have been a good idea for the cursor to have been hidden in the main flash. Otherwise pretty nice though.



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samsonloftin responds:

Ok, and for the girls....Eh first time with animating with female characters trying to look somewhat attractive, but thanks for the feedback I'll work on those areas.

Gratz on Daily 4th, you deserved it.

- Good stuff -
I like what you did with the button to the Valentines collection and the mouse was cute aswell. Some funny yet original jokes. The shading was very good on every character because it the feel of the light very well. The VA was very good aswell because there wasn't only one person doing VA, there was a lot so that was good becasue you could get the exact soudn of voice you wanted from a wide range of people, that's the problem with alot of flash authors: they can't get the VA'ers. But I suppose you manged to get some loyal to you.

- Bad stuff and improvments -
There was some un-realistic parts like the girl with the green jacket it was a bit too reaviling for real-life.

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Thanks for your review, I can always count on the Review Request Club for some positive and constructive feedback.


that was great

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it was funny


I listened the whole way through to hear my music

Was fooled, but enjoyed it nonetheless.

Animation was great, sometimes the voice got a little overdrive, but it was still very funny and enjoyable. And its the story of my life, so that definatly helped.

Thanks for using my tune, epic scene selction music indeed haha

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samsonloftin responds:

No problem, thanks for creating the tune, it was amazing!

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Credits & Info

4.09 / 5.00

Feb 12, 2008
9:00 PM EST
Comedy - Original
  • Daily 4th Place February 14, 2008