Wasn't that bad. ;)
-The humor was pretty good.
-The flash itself was good. I like the way you did it.
-The Storyline was just great.
-Keep playing around with your voice to discover lower and higher pitched sounds/talking.
-Make it run a little bit fast and a little bit slow. Medium, I would say.
-It was a little bit random, I didn't know what was gonig on.