Keeping this up for historical purposes, I finished this when I was fourteen (although I started it not long after I finished Roll Along).
Honestly, this was a nightmare to complete, and I experienced my first bout of burnout after finishing. Animation is waaaaaay more fun when you're doing it with friends. Although I made some loop animations / super short collaborations after this, I wouldn't return to doing a full-on short film until Reynold Dunbar and the Alien, at which point I brought my friends along to help :)
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Credit for the easter egg goes to Mr.GameAndWatch (Craig Culp). Can you find it? Here's a hint - find a snowman in the 3x4 boxes.
Wasn't that bad. ;)
~!Good Points!~
-The humor was pretty good.
-The flash itself was good. I like the way you did it.
-The Storyline was just great.
~?Improvements?~
-Keep playing around with your voice to discover lower and higher pitched sounds/talking.
-Make it run a little bit fast and a little bit slow. Medium, I would say.
-It was a little bit random, I didn't know what was gonig on.
/ooooo I think i'll get some other people to do voicework from now on. But thank you.
2/5, 6/10
Movie was alright. Still needs a bit of improvement. Here's my opinion on it.
Pros:
1. Humor: A bit funny but needs some of improvement.
2. Animation: Animation was alright.
3. Plot: Plot was alright.
Cons:
1. Voice acting: Horrible. Needs lots of improvements. There is a Voice acting club around Newgrounds if you need help.
2. Graphics: Graphics where below average. They need improvement. Some of the stuff (like the arms) where sticks.
I Recommend:
1. Improve your voice acting. It could be hard but way worth it.
That's all. The movie was alright. Just needs some improvements and it could be good.
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I'll take it. Thanks
Random!
Quite a random little movie, really enjoyable though.
The graphics were quite good, incorporating many different styles, and coming together to make a glorious feast for the eyes. There was some points, especially the start, so slow things down.
The music was a good choice, coinciding with the way the movie was going, nothing wrong there. And aswell the voice acting was quite good. Excellent job on the audio front.
The story seemed a bit random, but I liked too.
OVerall a very good vid
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The voice acting was TERRIBLE! Even I know that! Anyway, thanks for the review.
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I like this animation. It starts of pretty hectic, like some sort of intro for an animated series.
One has to watch it more than once to get all the little details you added in there, but it's definetly worth it.
The drawings style is a bit sloppy, but I think it suits this flash very well.
However, the quality of the sound was quite bad, which let the flash down a bit. Maybe you shouldn't compress the audio that much.
Also the voice actings had that bad sound quality, but it was good in every other aspect.
I did find the easter egg, even though I had to start over the flash serveral times, because that snowman is gone so fast.
The easter egg is very random and quite funny. Do you know which language that theme from "Duck Tales" was sung in?
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Yes, the audio is quite bad since my mic I recorded everything in is somewhat old. The theme song was in Finnish, as it said in the credits. Glad you enjoyed the graphical portions of the movie, and thanks for the review.
Pretty decent
Animation style is good, it could have been a bit smoother, but it was fun to watch. Easter egg was random, not bad, but the actual movie was better.
With a bit more practice, I'm sure your skills will become more tidy and better to watch.
Nice movie, certainly interesting. O.o
Good job.
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Interesting movies tend to be better than movies that aren't