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What's the haps people? I've got my second Star Work cartoon finished and for you to look at. In this one, Trooper and 10-lbs toy with their time traveling guest for laughs, only to end up in a world of trouble. Actually, they do pretty well so there's no consequence. So yeah.

Give it a shot and leave a review, because y'all know how much I love those. Please try to keep the "your animation sucks/make the art better" comments to yourself because I've heard it all before -- I want to see if you guys can like this on it's own merits. One thing I did try to improve on my first one after the comments I got were the jokes.

Alright, take care. I'll be back next month

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Really good

I remember I reviewed the first episode of this like 2 years ago, and said how I thought it would make a good series, and now there are like 12 episodes, I've got to catch up!

Anyway this episode was really funny, really good writing!

Uptown-SlimJim responds:

Heh, you were sorely missed. Thanks for watching

I like it more than bagels.

Well maybe not, that was a bit of an exageration.
Quite a good episode though. :)

As they say in Brooklyn, early to be early to get the worm!

Uptown-SlimJim responds:

You're gonna be on TV, you're gonna be a TV star

I like!

Very nice! The pacing was right, and the voice acting was good. Only one question: what was the music playing in the end credits? It was nice, but I couldn't catch the name of it from the very credits it played over...

Uptown-SlimJim responds:

It's a remixed version of the moon level music from the Ducktales game on the NES. Found it on ocremix one day, I think humans were given ears because of that song.

Cool. Nuf Said.

But although that the faces and moving mouths need work. I also think that the captain doesn't move his mouth after the Bug-Guy talks, and then the entrie flash just freezes on that one single frame, try and fix that but otherwise, Great Work, Keep It Up! - 7/10 & 3/5 - KamiCosmic

Uptown-SlimJim responds:

I accidentally uploaded an earlier swf of this project. It should be fixed now, so if you want to give it another whirl don't let me stop you.

Also, I didn't expect there to be a big sentence right after "Nuff said"

It is a little funny

It is okay. The jokes were okay. But I didn't really get into it. I liek the idea though. And the changing scenes give it more depth and add to the story (which is a good idea)

Uptown-SlimJim responds:

Fair enough. Next one will have like a thousand different scenes

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