Really good
I remember I reviewed the first episode of this like 2 years ago, and said how I thought it would make a good series, and now there are like 12 episodes, I've got to catch up!
Anyway this episode was really funny, really good writing!
Author Comments
What's the haps people? I've got my second Star Work cartoon finished and for you to look at. In this one, Trooper and 10-lbs toy with their time traveling guest for laughs, only to end up in a world of trouble. Actually, they do pretty well so there's no consequence. So yeah.
Give it a shot and leave a review, because y'all know how much I love those. Please try to keep the "your animation sucks/make the art better" comments to yourself because I've heard it all before -- I want to see if you guys can like this on it's own merits. One thing I did try to improve on my first one after the comments I got were the jokes.
Alright, take care. I'll be back next month
Uptown-SlimJim responds:
Heh, you were sorely missed. Thanks for watching
I like it more than bagels.
Well maybe not, that was a bit of an exageration.
Quite a good episode though. :)
As they say in Brooklyn, early to be early to get the worm!
Uptown-SlimJim responds:
You're gonna be on TV, you're gonna be a TV star
I like!
Very nice! The pacing was right, and the voice acting was good. Only one question: what was the music playing in the end credits? It was nice, but I couldn't catch the name of it from the very credits it played over...
Uptown-SlimJim responds:
It's a remixed version of the moon level music from the Ducktales game on the NES. Found it on ocremix one day, I think humans were given ears because of that song.
Cool. Nuf Said.
But although that the faces and moving mouths need work. I also think that the captain doesn't move his mouth after the Bug-Guy talks, and then the entrie flash just freezes on that one single frame, try and fix that but otherwise, Great Work, Keep It Up! - 7/10 & 3/5 - KamiCosmic
Uptown-SlimJim responds:
I accidentally uploaded an earlier swf of this project. It should be fixed now, so if you want to give it another whirl don't let me stop you.
Also, I didn't expect there to be a big sentence right after "Nuff said"
It is a little funny
It is okay. The jokes were okay. But I didn't really get into it. I liek the idea though. And the changing scenes give it more depth and add to the story (which is a good idea)
Uptown-SlimJim responds:
Fair enough. Next one will have like a thousand different scenes