improved drawings and animation, as well as making it longer would be better,
but ur on the way to being good. now u just need to make his arm look like it's moving.
You know nobody's going to like this. I'm not going to say "Give up!" but I'm going to say "Plan ahead." There was no point to this. A man stabs a geezer in the back with a knife. Said man looks like he's having a particularly difficult shit. Said geezer's blood looks like red rice. Let's put this sad thing out of its misery, huh?
Not that bad...
Pretty good... THOUGH I HATE YOUR BRITNEY VIEWERS! HE PISS ME OFF CUZ THEY VIOLATE THE NG PORTAL SUBMISSION RULEZ! But I still thought this was ok.
one of the worst ever. the last guy brought up an interesting point, well not really, but his comment made me think of this. you ever notice that over 90% of the time you click on "Jump to Random Portal Entry" the movie you get to see is a worthless pile of crap?