terrible

To make a good flash, you need to animate more than your intro. Try creating and developing characters. For good advice on character development, feel free to view my news post. It is very evident that this flash required no effort. I bet if you try next time, it won't get so many bad reviews.

Captivating

First I'd like to say that this flash rocks.
Unbelievably well done my friend.
Captures your attention immediately.
kinetically well thought out I feel.

Yes I'd like for you to make another one.
Overpowered with emotion I became towards the end.
Unusually fresh and not at all spam.

Since when have you been submitting flash?
Probably for a long time now.
Although I feel the graphics could of used some more work.
Maybe next time you'll add some more characters.
Mostly because I don't think you had enough in there.
Exactly who was the artist that made that music?
Regular fans of yours are really going to like this submission.

YFSMFPOS