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It Was Good But There Was Nothing To It.
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REVAMPED!!!
for all of you that don't believe this is a place for videos (even though it says EVERYTHING BY EVERYONE right at the top of this here screen).. I ADDED ANIMATION! promise!
nrrrd grrrl is in desperate need of help so she seeks out the promininent detective, Private Dick Jones to help find her stolen identity
Hatestheday responds:
what does that even mean? how can it be good but not have anything to it?
Well... I enjoyed it! I see potential
seemed original, and it had some style... some suggestions-
subtitles,
more use of animation,
maybe use some other sound effects-
Keep doing your thing man... but try to improve on your animations
Sorry...
I don't think this is bad because Newgrounds can't have videos. I just didn't think it was very well done. It wasn't TERRIBLE, but make the story-line a lot clearer, and make the audio fit with that of a b/w silent film. And you have to either learn to act or add in some more humor. And the camera was a little shaky, which is always irritating to watch. Still, it was a good effort, so you get 7.
nerd girl i want to burn you
there is no place for love in this flash....just fire....lots and lots of napalm
Hatestheday responds:
i'm not even sure what you meant by that?
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2.38 / 5.00
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- Feb 3, 2008
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