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^^Good Points^^
Not bad at all. I'm not at all a fan of claymation, but nonetheless, there is no doubt that this was pretty well done. Your animations are very well done. You've obviously spent a lot of time making this and making sure everything was smooth. Neat storyline as well. Hope to see more from you in the future!
^^Needs Improving^^
The only thing that really stands out as needing improving would be the image quality. I don't know if it was your camera or Flash that did it, but I would have liked to see some higher quality images.