Not the greatest but not too bad.

In all honesty this won't likely make it to the portal. But most of the reason would be that you used stick for a music video.
That's not usually a good idea. Sometime it works... but rarely.
The timing on the action with the song was good though I will admit. But you may want to add some comedy or a little something else to help it out, but that's up to you. Also in the bar make some more people move besides just the guy drinking.
Not bad for a beginner. You have some potential behind this.

good start

but like the other guy said, use thinner lines to improve the drawings. Interesting idea with the music.

Nice =)

Nice with the music =D
I suggest thinner lines to improve drawing quality. But good idea and mix with music.

alright

not good but you have potential