Appealing to the 1st grade
Kill the dialog, dialog bad!
You could also add some humor, and a plot.
Author Comments
Well, see, I gots this sprite comic, and I decided to mess up with Flash a bit to get a new issue. I just used three hours, so it's like one minute or so, but I tried hard and methinks it's good.
If anyone wants to see the rest of the comics (hosted at twilight-station.com) click the icon at the PreLoader or go to:
http://thealfasector.twil ight-station.com/
--Dark_Alfa
despite what others have said
I rather liked it, could have been done just a tad bit better, but being as I am a fan of both sonic and knuckles I rated it 5 and 10 and fav'd it, I thought it was done rather well, could have been a bit longer but I expect to see more from you like this
Not So Beautiful
Yes its smooth but could be longer and with some more enemies...
It was a intro?
I like it!
i mean it was entertaining.
but it was WAAAAAy too short
it was also a bit slow paced
Its Cool
I think its cool the only issue is its a bit boring but maybe i just haven't seen the other previous ones.