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Grapefruit Isle

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Hello there! After much thought, I've finally made a animation that you should find interesting!


Even if you detest it, I would love some good feedback giving me an idea of what to change and what to do better.


Thanks, and enjoy!


[EDIT] Woo hoo! No award of any kind! And an average score of 4.6 out of ten! Truly this is my pride and joy.


[EDIT] i think I won!

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amazing

awesome job, interesting art style.

Pretty Funny

i guess i would say this would be shoot and miss. it was alright, the humor, was okay, but i know you from school and you can do a lot better. so i liked it but its not the greatest. you could work a little on your drawings, but overall its still pretty good. i know i'm gonna be seeing much better from you, thanks for posting this. Good Luck with your Future animations

Pretty good!

The animation wasn't the best but the flash delivered a pretty funny message and I liked it overall!

I hope to see more work from you soon.

the-bee responds:

Thanks! Hopefully, you will!

Just wasn't interesting

Your drawing was ok
But the overall concept was delivered terribly
Improve on your delivery techniques

Lol

funny.... maybe make it longer but other than that it was funny XD good job

the-bee responds:

Glad you found it funny! Yeah, it could have been longer, but I wanted to keep it short so I didn't get bored and give up, know what I mean?

Credits & Info

Views
4,276
Votes
8
Score
2.43 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 28, 2008
12:15 AM EST