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Sitcom - pilot (revised)

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I revised and refined the pilot a little.

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Hmm, it was a bit short.

Some of this wasn't too bad and it had some fairly alright jokes in it, but just as soon as the not too bad stuff started happening you just ended it, which was really dissapointing, it would have been much nicer if this had been longer. It played like a really corny sitcom, I'm not sure if that's what you intended or not, if it was well done, if it wasn't then this was a fairly poor job. The voices sound was of a poor quality and at times it was hard to understand, the robot in particular. I'm assuming that this was only short due to the fact that this was a pilot, so I'll go watch the other two now, I've already seen Episode 1 though, I recall watching it a few years back and I believe I also reviewed it.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

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