parts of it were ok
Kinda reminded me of Gumby lol. it was alright but the only problem was that I thought there wasnt really much of a plot or a point to it. other than that I liked it. please try harder on the next submission you do :-)
it was good but it gets boring
you have very good clay-mation and pretty damn good sound. However I didn't find it funny. I think trying your hand at something serious might work out better. Course this is MY view and you don't have to follow it.
sorry dude no
dry humour, with a poor script, with poor storyline was just asking to be a poor movie
god i hate the word Mozeck now
sorry wish i could have given you better
You liked it before? :P
But the story was quite boring. Work on making more interesting stories. Ask your friends. Friends always have good ideas of stories.
Well it's not that I have bad stories - it's that I write them as I animate so I can't spend time perfecting them nor can I plan out an episode fully. As my camera is going to be in repair for 4 weeks (I dropped it :P) then I shall write out several shorts and see if they're better. if so, it's scripting all the way, baby.