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Iron Legends (unfinished)

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this is an unfinished film i made during a flash class. this is my first flash vid and i have a long way to go before i will actrully like my work but i feel its a good start for a noob.

This story takes place in the Cygnarian Coast. it tales the tale in how Osmand Marr got his Other soul in him when the Iron Lich attacked this remote town.

I do not own the rights of characters and places of Warmachine or Iron Kingdoms.


OMG!! If that's a first the finshed will be WOW!!

Dude that was incredible. You have got to finish it. This is like waiting for a sequel. I would have given you a 9 1/2 but there aren"t half choices. LOL
I know it's WIP but is the kid and the guy at the end the same? I sort of get the connection, he's dreaming/remembering right? I also laughed (couldn't help it sorry) when the tower became flat. I know, I know it isn't finished that's why I didn't slam you for it. :) The music fit like a hand in a glove, perfect choice. I do get the feel of your vision for this story and I bet you already know about things like hands and that the charecters don't move their mouths with words, that's the unfinished part. In the last scene when the door opens were you planning to have a shadow fo someone in the dorway? That would have been a cool effect, speaking of which I loved the bit with the Iron dude and the broken window, great detail. Keep 'em coming this was great!!!!

Damn good for a work in progress...

For a first time flash I'm hella impressed. Can't wait to see the finished product.

marr5 responds:

thanks! ive learnd alot from when i made this till now so i might finish it soon.


Why is it in slowmotion? That doesn't even look like war! It made me asleep.
Good graphics but no action at all.
2 wrong: lines around the ship and the image of the bad guy in the window


This movie is nice, I'd love to see it finished, I mean REAAAALLLY like to see it finished.

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Fascinating and different

This is by far the most interesting movie I've seen on Newgrounds in a long time. While you may not like your own animation (I'll agree it was painfully slow at times, but usually not bad) the art itself was very good. The dialogue was well-written and I especially liked the voice acting. It also seemed like there might have been a very interesting story behind all this that I found myself wanting to know more about. I BEG you to do more work in flash. =P

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2.59 / 5.00

Jan 25, 2008
2:20 AM EST
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