OMG!! If that's a first the finshed will be WOW!!
Dude that was incredible. You have got to finish it. This is like waiting for a sequel. I would have given you a 9 1/2 but there aren"t half choices. LOL
I know it's WIP but is the kid and the guy at the end the same? I sort of get the connection, he's dreaming/remembering right? I also laughed (couldn't help it sorry) when the tower became flat. I know, I know it isn't finished that's why I didn't slam you for it. :) The music fit like a hand in a glove, perfect choice. I do get the feel of your vision for this story and I bet you already know about things like hands and that the charecters don't move their mouths with words, that's the unfinished part. In the last scene when the door opens were you planning to have a shadow fo someone in the dorway? That would have been a cool effect, speaking of which I loved the bit with the Iron dude and the broken window, great detail. Keep 'em coming this was great!!!!