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The Fall of Troy

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Something I did for English class, which should explain the quality. Sorry, no pre-loader, but its has a small file size so it shouldn't matter.

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i didn't fall

my name is Troy but i am very stable and very rarely fall which is very inaccurate and wtf does a wooden horse have to do with me falling

P.S...i'm just being stupid the flash wasn't very good could do better



I could be better

If you want, you can take the time to fix it up some more. The graphics are pretty good, but the animation could be better. Make the characters look like they are walking and give it a more realistic feel. On the horse, you can make the shadow move when the sun sets. The music fist perfectly with it, I really like how it blends in with the rest of the animation. With some more time and work, I can see it being pretty good.

It is your choice, but I see some potential to it.


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not bad at all

The story was all there and I loved that little subtitle at the end. I was bent in half laughing when I saw the guys fall out of the horse. how they seemed to move in a robotic fasion and pile up like bowling pins. the background music was ok. if your considering going pro with this I'd work with the people animation. I have to agree with two of the previous comments with the guy in the fire and the wheels on the horse.

Aside from those things you did really good for an English class project.


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ehh

im not going to be rude like most people... this isn't totally bad. I enjoyed the art and music.
it could use some improvement but it waesn't completely horrible

What song was that by the way?


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Bad

This piece was drawn really poorly. You could have at least had their legs move or the wheels move or even better had the wheels size look right. I don't think that this piece was made for here nor do I think it should be here.


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Views
5,744
Votes
420
Score
3.32 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 21, 2008
7:19 PM EST
Genre
Other