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i know it's awkward to just post about 30 seconds movies but this is still unfinished i'll post in the finish version when it's ready . i just feel maybe i could do with some advice and help.
hey there! it's me.... really great job over there.....i'm sorry but i'm very occupied in these days.... so i didn't do very much with our "project"(i'm even a little lazy XD) but i can see that you are doing a great job..... my advices: i'd like to see more blood..... maybe make the scenario a little bigger... and maybe add some weapons.... now i'm going to see your other submission.... than i think that i will try and continue my crappy one....XD keep on the great job!
thanks alessio. and by the way your animations are cool. you just don't have the right time, yet, i know you have it in you too. vero? so try and bring it out. i know i'm waiting for the day you will o.k. ;)
it was sick
dude that was really tight still NUMBER 1 THING: MAKE A STORY LINE
but it was tight
i finally decided to make a short storyline on one of me test clip, the new one, u know just a short one with about 3 episodes. just to test the use of storyline before getting into bigger project.
and thanks for the comment i appreciate ur support.
Not to great
1) Over used theme
2) Over used sounds
3) Over used camera
4) Over used colours
5) Over used amount of enemies
6) Over used cliche
well i guess i over used a lot of things heh???
well i'll not to next time. thanks.
Some cool aspects, and definitely more than I originally thought in terms of value. the stone cracking effects were nice. Add music, a background, some story and you got a decent movie
thanks i'll try my best to do that.
But this should be in NG Alphas.
Ok, so it was pretty good from an animation perspective.
Sound effects were good (maybe a little repetitive though).
And the times when everyone stood still. Those went for too long.
Good work though!
well like i said it was just a test clip. i would have posted it to the ng alphas only i don't just know how.
and by the way the place people stood still are actually places were i intend on adding text later on. but thanks for the comment, and try and see the complete version when it will be out.
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