needs improovement

be sure to add in audio and voice-over at some point. Oh and some Trippy music too.

Ugh...

I've said it before that I dislike the Clock Crew. All prejudice aside, here's your review.

+ It was animated fine, for a clock. Clocks don't have much depth to your characters.
+ You didn't use one of those queer mechanical Clock Crew Voices for your character. That's good.

- Although the queer voice wasn't in it, there was no sound, either. Add some.
- Halfway through the movie with the flashy area made my eyes burn. If I had epilepsy, I could have tracked you down and sued you. You better hope no one gets a seizure from this.
- No real point to the flash. What is he doing? Where is he trying to go? Will he eat a bran muffin for dinner? Get a concept for the flash.

Overall: Not good. Simply not good.

My eyes!

Ugh, that flashing part wasn't really pleasant...
Anyway, it wasn't really clear what was going on. Actually it wasn't clear at all. And the animation was poor. Most of them were some shape/motion tweens. I have nothing against tweening, but try to use them better.