for a second flash...
i actualy liked it!if the graphics were improved and it was longer this could turn into something really great.i have never made a flash but if its possible to make the characters and objects move a little faster that would make it a whole lot better.
Kool Better Than Me I'm Struggling
Nice like the different views and the art what i think you should go back at the same flash and try to tidy it up a bit and i'm telling you now it would look sick(awsome)
Needs to be a little longer
Good movie, nice work on animation however the length of it let it down.
Should have worked on it longer before submitting it.
for being so new at flash it was good. I think the continuation will probably be better. but keep working, and try with a little more sound.
like you said it was short, it had some poor spots in the animation, and didn't really flow very well... also needs sound effects...
but you have potential, keep working at it