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manly mistakes but nice action
coulda used some sound effects for a more solid feel but still pretty good
keep at it
dead points meaning times where nothing happens and all u do is listen to the music which not the right one for this movie there were some good points like the fights they had some very nice bits in them they need to be a bit more fast and then it would make the fighitng great
but still im a DBZ fun and like the idea so keep on trying and ull make somthing great
I have to say that I love daft punk and I haven't watched DBZ in years, so while I really enjoyed your choice of music, I have a few suggestions that you can consider. Really nicely styled flashes like this, when they're based on a series, are great when they spoof the show/game/etc and use audio from outside sources, like phoenix wrong. Of course, you don't have to be putting funny words into the characters mouths like with PW, but you could always write lines of dialogue to make fun of the way the show's action is; for example, i liked the long wait while the guitar chimes rang and such, that was very much like what they do, standing there and waiting forever, sometimes for episodes until the action moves along. Of course, if you could find the original japanese audio and subtitle it with funny stuff, that would be great, too. And any of the bumpers from the original japanese broadcast would be a fun addition. Also, for a sequel, adding some of the classic reactions that you get in DBZ for while the pair are fighting. the length was good for the length of the song, so no complaints, although it didn't seem like you captured the action of the song with the action of the animation, but this could have been because of the audio problem you experienced. This piece is good, and could be fine tuned and resubmitted with the audio synched up better, and I would give it a higher vote, as it is, you got a 3, which is pretty good and my basic way of saying I liked it, and there's only a couple ways it might not be satisfying. It's a good concept for a flash, and it worked, it was carried out well, but the final execution just got a little hindered by that audio problem. I think this piece doesn't have too much further to go in fine-tuning to being a really great short. Good job!
But not good either. You had a nice clean style, and great potential, but be more original, and make a more dynamic story line. TRY AGAIN AND YOU SHALL SUCCEED ^w^d