lol omg roflmao
i should give you a 2 for the animations but it was funny so kool
Author Comments
OK people, this is just my pretty much my first cartoon submitted here in newgrounds,im only 13 so give me a break on the ratings, The plot and ideas are completly original! if you like it, heres my blog where i keep a few [2] other cartoons links, http://mvnpics.blogspot.c om/
Enjoy!
Not bad
It has some potential, and a decent first submission. You could work on your drawing skills some, practice with flash some more, and have some voice talent. You could become a good flash artist.
Lol
Well it was kinda ugly and the animations very stiff, but hey, it was kinda funny too!
I gave it 3 for good spirits!
Has potental
It was pretty long but the story was pretty good for not having much detail. I think in time you will get better at creating the graphics so don't use stick figures forever.
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3.13 / 5.00
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- Jan 11, 2008
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