slow but good
slow paced, but funny. could work on your voice acting
Author Comments
Okay here it is, the beginning of my first flash series, it took me way longer than it should have. Then when I was done, I realised that I did not do very much characterization. So before I come out with Traction man #2 I will make some shorts, to give a little background on the characters, and maybe introduce some more.
Anyways I hope you all like it. Also TM #2 is being scripted right now.
yarvenclog responds:
Its true, my voice acting needs work, but my resources are limited. Hopefully I will be able to change that soon enough.
pretty good
I'd say that was pretty well done, for the most part. I would have enjoyed it more if Traction man got stabbed in the eye with the pen =D. But still...good job.
yarvenclog responds:
Why would you wish such harm on the champion of the mall?!
I'll be waiting...
I could have been a little faster paced, but it was funny as hell... Can't wait for the next!
yarvenclog responds:
pacing seems to be a recurring problem, Ill fix it, in the next episode!
Congrads!
This was the only thing that didn't completely suck in the portal today. Do you win an award? Hell no! ^O^ But you win a review!
This was very funny. I loved every second of it. It didn't have any dry, or overally gross humor. It was very entertaining and the art did its job very nicely. I am looking foreward to more in this series. <3 This is just great.
[5/5]
~Itami~
yarvenclog responds:
I am very grateful to hear that I get the priviledge of your review, its no award but.... its not really that close either.
Great Movie!
This was the best movie that I've reviewed today by far. I just have one suggestion that would make it better. Make a sequel.
yarvenclog responds:
Yess'um mastah' the sequel be on its way!!