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Thanks people for great reviews(>.> some of you are a bit to me)

I can not belive that i got past the gates of the portal.. I mostly get banned for this crap
I slap on
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Replay works
No bugs found
:P please put in collections(My ng)(OFCORSE)
NG display(tomflup)
sbc(rupeeclock)
MORE TO COME

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nice!

I love this kind of stuff!Its pretty good.Need a few changes and you got front page.


PivotDK responds:

o rly?


hmm

well, first: sit up in your chair, second: don't moan about blams and try not to stay on one subject for too long, Third: work on animation
Fourth: if you've got an anoying voice (sorry) get someone else to do it, or disguise it, but not like strawberry clock
fith: strawberry clock sucks, B is the second letter of the alphabet, not an animation!! and why does he hide his voice i wonder?...
anyway, yeah, get rid of the clock aswell and work on it!
As the legendary Bopit says, "Do it the same, But BETTER!"



hmmm

to be honest, i didnt like this one at all, sorry. Better luck next time.



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LIKES
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THINGS TO IMPROVE ON
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Well, if your 10 years old, try to edit your voice a tad to hide that.

Also, try to remove the time from the corner, because that kind of draws my attention, and i didn't really pay attention to your video.

Talk Louder.

And finally, strawberry clock isn't good. The Letter B isn't animation. Newground needs to wake up.

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I'm not totally heartless. You tried your best. 5/10 3/5



Hmmm...

First of all: STOP BEGGING FOR GOOD RATES!!!
Your flash submission should pass on quality, not you begging like a little baby.

Now, on to the movie:

-Since MY NG is some sort of hye now, I'm not going to start on unoriginality here. But, if you participate in a hype like this, a contribution to the original, make it worthy. This is not even near AllenAwesome's movie.

-Sound quality was horrible. You don't have an interesting voice or way of telling (I don't blame you) and should've spoken more clearly.

-Video wasn't that bad. Sure, not that great of quality, but you're young and I don't expect you to own some kind of $3000 camera.

-Animation sucked. It's that simple. You just popped up some icons or rectangles with blam on it and then write: "Ok people I have spent pretty much all my time working on this flash!". If that's your best and all your time, I think it's not even worthy of the 2.10 it has now. Also, the idea of these MY NG movies is that you interact with the animation. Not pop up some crappy rectangles when you slightly move your hand.

To be honest with you, I didn't even see the whole movie. I watched till the part with the pivo stick and then I clicked away since I already knew that there was't anything coming that had some quality.

The best part of all this is that I don't even blame you for all this. You're just another kid that thinks his movies are good, just because you're happy you can animate a rectangle

Let me give yu some advice: Practice animating and drawing, but don't submit. Simply take 2-3 years of your life, just to practice. Then take a look at this and compare the result. You'll see that you have progressed a lot since this movie. After that, start submitting again.

Hope I helped you out a bit here,

Vincoid


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Jan 10, 2008
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