you have improve but..........

you have inproved your graphics but the letter or what they say i think they where shown too fast, but good work anyways

rainbows

well you could take more time for it and these rainbows let my eyes bleed

Too Many Rainbows...

I don't know why you made nearly every charakter in rainbowcolors...
Anyway:Your characters were drawn better than in most Siick Figure Movies,but they were animated really bad...The music was good but nothing too special and it didn't fit in the movie as well.There seems to be somekind of story behind this,but I can't see it.
There were also some things good in the movie.First of all you put,of course, somekind of story in this.Your ending made it this abit more exciting and as I said before I liked the music.
First of all you need to improve your characters,second you've got to make the story more clear and not just put some fights together.
Overall I gave you a 3/10 and a 2/5 and I hope you will improve your skills in drawing,animating and storywriting for your next flash.