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Well FBF is nice...

... but this is pretty well just a piece of practice for you, I'd say, and not really anything worth taking great note of.

Sure the animation is FBF, which is great, more people should use FBF, but it's wobbly and it's really just a sequence of a few hundred frames of doodles flaoting about. I haven't got a problem with random animations with music and stuff, but this itself is so minimal and really just doesn't quality as anything but a mediocre-ly animated sketchbook.

My advice, clean some stuff up, give it some colour, give it some thought. Even something that is totally random should have some thought to it. Also, use the onion skin, and if you already are, pay closer attention to it and make sure you have things lined up properly. Also you don't need to continually re-draw EVERYTHING in your frame. That's the beauty of Flash, layers; take advantage of them. Even on a single character, why not try and break it up and you say only need to draw the head for some movement or whatnot.

That's my suggestion. Once you've done this, post more animation, and I'll have my eye out for it, and then I can offer guidance on actual principles of animating, such as timing.

paddy-ryan responds:

thanks

This movie is baad.

I am sparing you from a zero.I liked the music

I just have one question for the author.

What in the blazes was that?

I think I read that this movie is rated Everyone.
Correct me if I am wrong,but wasn't that man's head in the prologue turned into a penis that ejaculated sperm?

Please,if anyone understands what happens in this video,please feel free to message me.

paddy-ryan responds:

what?

Good

I liked it..it was something freaky hehe
Nice working anyway, but I would prefer that you set up the audience-lvl because I'm not sure that everyone want to see a cock-joke in the animation..even if its hard to see it.

paddy-ryan responds:

I'll take it in consideration,
I didnt think it could be offensive

Explination please?

Well, it was very stylized, though I had no Idea what was going on half the time... or any of the time. I saw a penis and some guy with superpowers, and some AT AT Type thing in there...
I would have liked it to be more coherent.

paddy-ryan responds:

birth death birth

it was a good story

i like the story if it even had one still random things are funny things in my book.

paddy-ryan responds:

random is part of a healthy balanced diet

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Jan 8, 2008
4:58 PM EST