graphics and angles of camera are good.
not bad, but ....
-there are no very good story : you should develop the origin of the conflict. Well, sticks no have personality.
-no many animations : the only animation i saw, it's sticks who fire .... You must move them !!!
I think, you should improve your animation: better movements and physic ...
If you perfect it, your animations will become more interesting !! ; )
its funn to see but i didnt like the stick style but yeah thats my opinion srry for the english iam not very good at it
Well done mate.
Needs more thought and effort
This flash could have really used a little bit of intelligence in many ways. Firstly the (lack of) coherant plot detracted from the animation, which in itself was done in a seemingly rushed manner. Secondly, the audio was also completely inappropriate for the flash, it seemed as if it was just shoved in at the last minute for the simple purpose of having some audio, rather than put in for its individual merits. Also, it could have used more research into chaos theory itself, the flash doesn't have any real reference to chaos theory. If you had taken the time to read up on chaos theory before you named the flash, you may have come up with something worthwhile and intelligenly poignant, but that clearly isn't the case.
In summary, this flash really needed some more careful thought in every aspect rather than just doing the first thing that comes into your head, or just shoving in some random audio that clearly doesn't fit.
And I suppose youd know how much effort was put into the animation having never made one yourself. Heres an idea, just stop blamming my stuff. Its rude and ignorant escpeically when you spam my inbox in the process. You want attention? Make your own flash!
Could've used a plot and i know its a random flash but still and all of shots went directly to their faces which is okay but u need some bodt shots